When you said you wanted to make a of bronze of David I didn't
think you meant this.
Who thought you would
cut him up and bronze him in small pieces.
It's not like no one knows who it is.
Even with his face contorted, there is no one else who looks like him.
I realize
you are a critic but his work was not so bad.
Of course,
they will eventually put all the pieces back together, figure out who he is and
you will have years and years on death row to mull his writings over in your
mind
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Now that's a tough critic. I'm not letting him/her read any of my writing. Fun read, Susan. Welcome back.
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Hi Susan,
ReplyDeleteMaybe he had the last laugh! One tiny suggestion. You could have saved three words by using contractions. I tend to do this too, so I think that's why I noticed. Makes the writing a little more informal, but when you only have 100 words, every word counts! Ron
Thanks. Good idea. I will (I'll) remember it. I love to learn.
ReplyDeletea painful lesson - even if he can claim it is "art."
ReplyDeleteNow that's what you call 'not liking' someone's work. Glad he's not reading anything of mine... Nice one.
ReplyDeleteOh my. Wouldn't want to get on this guy's bad side. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting approach to the prompt... piece by piece!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a character in Dean Koontz novel. I forget the title, but the guy would hunt down authors who expressed views he did not agree with.
ReplyDeleteI love Dean Koontz. I can not read them before I go to bed though.
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